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of your own words inspired by the following photo. - See more at:
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.XRHWr1ko.dpuf
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"Oh, I dunno. They cut my hours, so I started living on my
credit cards. Then I got sick and couldn’t work. Then I missed my rent a couple
times. How about you?"
Ha! Perfect response to the slouching, hands in pockets shadow.
ReplyDeleteSo, let me tell you MY story...
Great post!
Loved this!
ReplyDeleteOh, like where you took this.
ReplyDeleteposted. had lots to be happy about today!
ReplyDeleteI hope to avoid such a fate.
ReplyDeleteSo, THAT, explains his defeated slouch. I'd be bummed out, too.
ReplyDeleteUgh, poor guy! Thanks for linking up!
ReplyDeleteJust goes to show that your 33 words can be simple and effective. This might be just exactly what he said. Good one!
ReplyDeletePrecarious perch we have here that can change too quickly. I can hear the pain in the voice.
ReplyDeleteOh, poor fella! Great interpretation of the photo.
ReplyDeleteThis is a perfect description of some of the poor souls I met riding the bus in Seattle. I was always left feeling sad and very guilty for what I had after chatting with them.
ReplyDeleteWell done 33 words!
Well, that's a brutal little slice of reality, isn't it? Great take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteNice take on the prompt! Wonderfully written!
ReplyDeletewow...
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