Friday, August 02, 2013

Trifextra

This week's challenge: 33 words inspired by this photo --
33 of your own words inspired by the following photo. - See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.XRHWr1ko.dpuf


Author [ changó ] / photo on flickr


"Oh, I dunno. They cut my hours, so I started living on my credit cards. Then I got sick and couldn’t work. Then I missed my rent a couple times. How about you?"

 

15 comments:

  1. Ha! Perfect response to the slouching, hands in pockets shadow.
    So, let me tell you MY story...
    Great post!

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  2. Oh, like where you took this.

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  3. posted. had lots to be happy about today!

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  4. I hope to avoid such a fate.

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  5. So, THAT, explains his defeated slouch. I'd be bummed out, too.

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  6. Ugh, poor guy! Thanks for linking up!

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  7. Just goes to show that your 33 words can be simple and effective. This might be just exactly what he said. Good one!

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  8. Precarious perch we have here that can change too quickly. I can hear the pain in the voice.

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  9. Oh, poor fella! Great interpretation of the photo.

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  10. This is a perfect description of some of the poor souls I met riding the bus in Seattle. I was always left feeling sad and very guilty for what I had after chatting with them.

    Well done 33 words!

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  11. Well, that's a brutal little slice of reality, isn't it? Great take on the prompt.

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  12. Nice take on the prompt! Wonderfully written!

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