Friday, April 13, 2012

Trifecta

For this weekend's challenge, write a letter of apology in exactly 33 words. Addresses, salutations, closings, etc., do not count in the 33 words. 



Dear Beth,

I’m sorry I played with Daddy’s softball bat when I know I’m not allowed to. I’m also sorry I hit you in the head. I was aiming for your stomach, but you ducked.

Your sister,
Tess


13 comments:

  1. Cute .. the first thing that came to my mind when I read this.

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  2. Too funny. Sibling rivalries are the best!

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  3. Love this! I can see the whole thing play out in my mind. I was both Tess and Beth growing up. :-)

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  4. HI, here from Trifecta..
    and do you know my sister??? This was good, I wondered if you'd make it spookier, like it killed her, but I'm glad it was just that...an open apology.

    :)

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  5. That was both cute and funny at the same time.

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  6. Ha! Nicely done! Been there.

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  7. Out of the mouths/pens of innocent babes. At least she's honest! Thanks for the chuckle (only because I know this is fiction, or so I hope?!)

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  8. Hysterical! I'm an only child with four kids...I expect this to happen 'round my house at any moment...Great letter!

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  9. Ha! Perfect. I had sisters and I may have written something like this once. Fortunately, we all survived childhood. Nice job with this weekend's prompt!

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  10. Loved it. Sisters can be so difficult.

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  11. Fantastic - you totally captured it.

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  12. Oh yeah, this is so childhood and siblings. :)

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