This weekend's challenge: Using up to 333 words, recount a time of life that can be clearly
identified by the number three. The story should be
be true-ish, and an artistic creation, not just a
play-by-play account. Think less "blog post" and more "creative
writing."
The landlord’s tour didn't take long because the apartment was only 650
square feet. Just a three-room walk-up on the top floor of a “vintage
building,” which is real estate speak for “real old.” As we moved from
living room to dining room to bathroom, I was indifferent. All I saw were badly damaged hardwood floors, a tub but no shower, and steam
heat but no air conditioner.
“Ok,” I thought. “It’s not great but it’s what I can afford.”
But when we got to
the narrow galley kitchen, I fell in love.
A wide, shallow pantry took up half one wall, a sink with exposed plumbing took up the rest. There was an old Frigidaire that would require
defrosting with pans of boiling water and my blow-dryer set on high, and a
gas stove that would have to be lit with matches. The heavy
backdoor had a transom! And there was an odd little set of three shelves, waist
high and recessed into the wall.
“What’s up with this?” I asked.
“This building is from the 1920s,” the landlord explained. “That was the
door where the iceman made his deliveries.”
Suddenly I was enchanted. It was no longer a dingy old apartment, no
longer just what I could afford. Now it was a home where generations of women before me had lived. I could
imagine one wearing a house dress, standing right here, preparing dinner
while hearing about the Crash of 1929 on the radio. Maybe another had come in
through this big back door after seeing Casablanca
on a date with her boyfriend. All at once I saw beauty and heritage in this
kitchen, as only a highly-romantic 18-year-old girl can, and I believed I
belonged with those women I imagined had stood on this old linoleum before.
"I'll take it." The three
magic words sprang from my lips and Apt. 3A was mine. I lived here
happily for more than 20 years.
I just HAD to comment because I, too, experienced nearly the same at 21 with my first apartment in the city(although a 2 bedroom). It had transoms and the same delivery method for ice AND radiators in every room! Loved that knocking. Thanks for the memory.
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ReplyDeleteOh, I liked this one. For many years I lived in the Lovelace building in Bozeman, Montana. My apartment was two rooms, with a shared bathroom down the hall. My door had a transom. Your piece brought back many memories. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI like your descriptions - the place seems like it had such character. I really like how you imagined the memories of those there before you.
ReplyDeleteThings are too new where I live - not enough history. (My first place was a 300 sq. ft. studio with roaches. Ick!)
Thanks for linking up with Trifextra this weekend. This house sounds amazing, if you want my opinion. :-) I wish you had some photos to accompany your post, but I love what you said about envisioning the history before you. Great take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed this. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteIt sounds beautiful, and the fact that you lived there for 20 years shows how much you loved it.
ReplyDeleteThe house I grew up in had a door for the milkman that I was completely enchanted by! It's the little things that you really love about a place.
ReplyDeleteAm I correct that there were 3 3's? Props to you if so! (And if not, still a great story!)
ReplyDeletegreat job with the prompt 3 3's!
ReplyDeleteThis brings back memories of my first couple of living on my own deals during college. very vivid writing Gal
I really seriously love this story. I can identify with it, and from the comments it sounds as though other people can too. Really well done!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. My second apartment was in a beat-up old building but what sold me was the gorgeous wooden floors and the radiator. I loved that place.
ReplyDeleteI can soooo see this place. :)
ReplyDeleteI can soooooo see this. :)
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