This weekend's challenge: Using EXACTLY 33 or 333 words, write a creative piece inspired by this photo.
Ok, be that way. You won’t look at me, so I won’t look at
you. You’re just jealous of my pretty blonde hair and blue shoes. But they
don’t make sandals for hooves!
I wrote "be that way" in my entry before I ever read yours. That is SO the look she is giving. Nice work!
ReplyDeletePlus, my shoes are made of cowhide. Yours are made of hoof.
ReplyDeleteThis is cute! (Good thing she wasn't wearing a leather jacket :))
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ReplyDeleteSo cute.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't help but notice the look on the little girl's face, too. Funny.
ReplyDeleteCute! And I hear that tone so often frankly, in little princess girls my little boys know. Rings true! :). I've moved so here's my link and hope you start following me there . http://www.awriterweavesatale.com/2012/06/15/sandras-writing-workshop-hop-2/
ReplyDeleteClever piece, made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteThis is so sweet...I like your POV getting right into the lil' girl's thoughts! Well done!!
ReplyDeleteSo cute and very clever. What a little princess LOL!
ReplyDeleteThe little girl DOES look as though she could be thinking that! Nice job :)
ReplyDeleteVery sweet - I love that you worked in the facial expression. It's interesting to see what each writer focuses on.
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